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[kresola]

Imam ja, iz srednje, na engleskom:

She told him she loved him
well she always was little harsh on words
she never meant it, of course
it was a wierd moment
and the easiest way out
was to say those magic words
regardless of the truth
and how much it will hurt

few months later all is dead
his soul broken beyond repair
vampires in his head
they said their goodbyess
spiced it up
with a few fake smiles
he tought he's gonna die

he'll never love again
which is undestood
but found out later
to cry he never again could
he felt betrayed
and too scared
to let anyone again inside
she left him a privilege
to scar himself for life

[TigarZG1]

Šteta što nisam vičan pisanju pjesama....jer sad bi najradije složio neku zbediranu.... ....a ostalima koji su predhodno stavili svoje pjesme....svaka čast..

[kresola]

jel' iko na ovom forumu išta piše, nemojte se stidit, otkrijte se...
ja čekam da neko nešto posta pa da nastavimo sa unutarnjim strahovima, izvrnutim pogledima na svijet, ciničnim hedonistima...

evo ja ću, opet na engleskom

how to play this game
when the reality is sitting at my shoulder
drying my heart out
filling my mind
with the leftovers
of those days
that had gone by
when my life was a struggle
a sad, glorious battle
for my sanity

I write
when I'm empty inside
when the world is
high above these raining clouds
it feels
like a nightmare
I slipped into
and broke my leg
for the second time...

[Bahamut]

Da sam trijezan,ne bi je stavio

Tommorow

Help me break this vacancy.
Feeling lifeless,drained again.
Just let me realese this for a moment.
So I can continue tomorrow again.

Don't care about anything now.
Strugling with very exsistence itself.
But I know that tommorow this feeling will
go away.

...sigh...

[Jeff Murdock]

Mirta B.

Razni dizajneri se trude i trude
Rade vas svakakvih boja i oblika
Toliko truda, toliko muke
A za njih na kraju nitko ni ne pita

Još jedan tu tim je stručnjaka
Koji vrlo teško i marljivo rade
Smišljaju slogane i etikete
I razne pridjeve vam lijepe

Nekada davno padao sam na to
Blještave, zavodljive, oku ugodne
No kad Pandorina otvori se kutija
Nada za boljim jedino ostane

Ali danas konačno uživam u vinu
Drugo sve je po važnosti sitno
Sve boce završe na istom mjestu
Samo je ono unutra bitno

[kresola]

Evo opet malo srednje škole i mojih emotivnih muka

she held her head
inside a womb
of another girl
if I was to get close
she would be there with her
and it's not fun to loose
to another girl
chase a ghost or two
shallow dreams are trough
as you walk beware
she could be anywhere

portrait, sculpture, manifest
of a perfect life
has never passed me by
can't share a dream
with someone
who's not by my side
all the time
and if she's gone
I need to know
that she's here with me
ghost or witch or freak
baby I don't care
as long as you're alone there

[Moja malenkost]

prekrašno....

[Jeff Murdock]

Ivana L.

Znam da smo bili jedno za drugo
Al' smo se našli u krivo vrijeme
Ponekad ga se sjetim sa tugom
Prerano za tebe, prekasno za mene

Ja nisam imao hrabrosti
Ti si se nekako držala po strani
A uvijek se pojavila „ona“ tišina
Kada bi u sobi mi ostali sami

Bile su to godine čežnje
Skrivenih pogleda preko ramena
A onda si samo nestala bez riječi
I sada se budiš kraj mora i kamena

Mogla je biti jedna lijepa priča
Da našli smo snage za stisnuti play
Ovako ostaje samo ova pjesma
Una canzone d'amore, per lei

[Servant]

Zanimljivi nazivi pjesama J. Murdock...

[kresola]

Ah te žene...